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While I was in the bathroom,

I moved toward the mirror,
and away from the mirror,

Toward the mirror,
and away from the mirror,

and once more,

Toward the mirror,
and away from the mirror.

To watch my
body\'s upper quarter

Expand
and contract,

Expand,
and contract

and once more,

Expand
and contract.
©2003-2009 ~ecstaticstatic
:iconecstaticstatic:

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True story.

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:iconnihilim:
damn.

for such a simple poem,
this was catchy.

it may just be me,
but i see sex in this.

very sexual.

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-i: a.i,=n_
:iconacoldfaetus:
This, I like. Especially with the matter-of-fact description and statement of truth.
It's good to take the time. Well done, I applaud.
:iconhaliwa87:
i like this one , it could mean a lot of things ... kik ass :horns:
:icontea-chan:
It's so simple, and yet so cool. ^.^
:iconshefreak:
rhythmic and musical!

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August 6, 2003

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